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Hialtr's Saga
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For many years, in harbor and ports
The ocean dragons of the fair north did not row
Warships lie along the beaches and untested
Fear stirred the hearts of men here
No sails stained with sea spray
Death cut down our freedom,
In silent grief many cried
At the death of King Harald.
Yet still, many deemed it good
No other man save for Knut
Lay claim to the prize of Holvik’s high throne
For none of the descendants of Sweyn of Lodland,
Shall ever spy again the throne of power.
For the people’s king Knut, did have something in mind
For the betrayer of his cousin Harald the Proud
For on a time selected by King Knut,
Jarl Sweyn’s sons were seized and his men killed
For my own grandfather watched then,
The ships rise once more and row down the coast
Prowling then to Lodland to see the treacherous welp.
Above the prow, sailors looked on as the fire spitter roared once more
The bows were bound in gold, King Knut’s men rowed well.
And Holvik’s women watched on proudly,
As their young king was steering, his new ship Gresk
While his battle-hungry warriors
Dipped oars into the water quicker and quicker.
They could row without tiring,
Till the tarred oars were broken
And the broad blades lay idle
For trumpets would soon sound for battle.
At once, the ships reached Lodland
Lifting oars from the sea without tiring
Before the seventy sea oars
The dragon ships landed upon the sandy beach.
King Knut’s men arrived,
Eager to bring justice to the land.
On both banks of the Vjen river,
That which borders Lodland and Oranland,
All the people could be certain,
That swift punishment would follow
When King Knut’s ships landed there.
And at once, when Knut walked on to bring Sweyn to justice,
He saw then a vision of his dead cousin the king.
King Harald appeared to him above him, atop the cliffs
With a solemn gaze, the dead king pointed his cousin on
To the place where Sweyn had hid and where he would be found.
King Knut had been but a child, when Jarl Sweyn’s treachery was made
King Knut’s angered warriors,
sons and kinsmen of the men slain in Salia and at Onsund
Marked the vengeance they had felt,
And slaughtered the men of Lodland, bringing Sweyn to King Knut.
The Jarl of Lodland, lost sight of his eyes,
Pressed down, he had them ripped from him
The good King Knut marked his justice upon Sweyn’s face.
There did they drop the youngest of the Jarl's sons,
Eirik Sweynssen, now ruled in King Knut’s name.
Peace came upon the land, but dulled and quiet now.
For in this time, King Knut wed Ingerid the daughter of Harald Grensk.
The good and just King of Holvik
Won the match of his desire
For he had gained the hand of the daughter of a noble man
And a hoard of gold for himself.
Yet so, revenge stewed among those who remained loyal to jarl Sweyn.
The blind Jarl’s nephews, Skardi and Sardr
bid their time in the court of their cousin.
Waiting for the moment of weakness to reclaim their honor.
And as had been done before,
King Knut sent out raiding vessels to roam the sea.
Prized hulls of sturdy wood and fine sail
Once more rowed by strong armed northern men.
Freighted with hard won gold, they returned home
Through storm and gale and sea spray
They spotted home and made dock at the port.
Oak keel ploughed through the ocean
All the way west round the cape of the Halsats
Through their winding rivers, to the lands of riches there
After riches were won, many gave their support to King Knut
Who was known far and wide as the people’s king
Good and just in demeanor and wise in decision.
The King had four sons and beamed with pride for it,
Hamundr and Siggeir, were bright of hair and valiant.
Signy his third boy was dignified and diligent.
His last boy, little Hialtr, was but a babe,
when the sons of Hjodi, brother of Sweyn attacked.
Bright flame burned on the crest of the ship atop the sea
Near Voll, the royal dragon ships met the rebels.
A storm scattered all, save for a few of Hjodi’s son’s ships.
The raven ships of Sardr and Skardi roared in the sea
Picking apart the ships before them
Stumbling survivors, scattered by carnage
Sorrowfully fled to safety
Leaving the bulk of the fleet alone then.
And so good King Knut was left alone against his enemies
Many men lay fallen aboard the decks,
Blades tore them and cut their freedom from them.
In silent grief, the king watched his boats sink beneath the waves.
Now the seafaring king had little hope
Strong fear stirred in the hearts of his men
Warships lie smashed against the beaches
The death dealing sons of Hjodi
Sailed their vessels southward
Chasing the ragged ships of King Knut.
Many with power in Holvik,
Wished for the warring to cease,
And so called a council in the city
to discuss peace between the two parties.
Yet in the tents of the sons of Hjodi,
Drinking was done and a man under both did say.
“Which of your banners do you treasure most oh Lords?”
And so, the brothers did say they treasured the banner of the hawk.
For they did claim that whoever bore it into battle, would be victorious.
Yet Halldor, which was his name, did disagree with this.
He spoke, “I will believe in what you say,
when you have won another battle against King Knut.”
The brother’s eyes darted toward each other
And they sent messengers to call off the parlay with King Knut.
For the land split in two,
when the sailing ships of the brothers rowed further to Holvik
Fine ships under bad men, ploughed through the ocean.
And in battle, the two sides came and clashed outside the city
For the sons of Hjodi had acted treacherously.
But the gods granted them a short victory,
For blood red hands sized the green land around them
Open handed they came, to carry off wealth that was not theirs
When the pact between the brothers and King Knut was made
It was to be in peaceful accord
But strife came
At the pointed words of vile Halldor.
Tears were shed when the good and noble king Knut did fall
For the king had seen in a vision before,
The visage of his long dead cousin, the proud king Harald.
“Which would you prefer dear cousin, to come to me now
Or poison your rule with vile deeds against your enemies?”
King Knut did answer, “I wish for the choice to be yours fair cousin
For the choice before was robbed of you.”
And so King Harald bid his cousin to join him, and Knut did die.
So too did die, Knut’s sons along with him,
But spirited away was his last.
By the deed of Hamundr, was Hialtr saved
From the torture of Hjodi’s vile spawn.
For the boy heard the storm of arrows,
Raging all around
As he was led to his escape
By deed of his good brother Hamundr.
Now the princeling goes creeping from forest to forest
To the coast he goes where a ship awaits him
To sail to unknown lands.
Hialtr sailed across east seas, and made it to Rognmark
Where men had arrived who escaped the slaughter of King Knut’s men
By the next spring, they mustered ships and set sail.
That summer, they came upon the seat of Jomsgard
And the brothers there took in the exiled prince.
Gorm, head brother of the order, bid the prince welcome
Gorm sheltered the boy for a few years,
By the way of the sword did Hialtr become a man
Gorm made him a commander of the keep's defense
And gave him that good sword, called Hofung.
Hialtr grew within Jomsgard’s strong walls,
and when the time came, he bid farewell to it
he departed with these words,
“Far-off wolves howl over spoils,
They wipe good blood
from their greedy swords,
and under their nose,
shall I return.”
Hialtr sailed on, through the winding
rivers of the lands of the Prus
rather than plunder these lands,
Hialtr sheltered there for many years.
With a large following, he sailed on
to the city of the eagles, Komnekstad.
Bleak showers and dark rains came
the ships reached the city,
and hard did they row
before they reached the stalls there.
Iron-shields on vessels so gleaming
ringed in the wealth of the old north,
flaunting the colorful rigging of their nation.
The exiled princeling saw ahead of him
The gilded roofs of the great city.
There lie the jewel and purple-crowned dock
which sat upon the maw of that,
where dragon ships wept
upon the mountain walls
of the emperor of cities.
There ruled Matthias, son of Teodor, Emperor.
The prince gathered there
to present himself well
and rally gold and iron
for his vow renewed would be.
There, Northmen came to serve under the army
of Leo, that kinsman of the Emperor,
to make ragged the lord's enemies.
Many ships sailed south to fight
and they were among them.
The Northmen drew lots
with the emperor's man,
for sway, and land to camp.
But Leo's guile was unsurpassed
And the Northmen were tricked.
Cheated and made a mockery of,
the Northmen were granted a low place
below on the valley floor
of the large encircling camp
there with the dark southerners.
Hialtr at this was angry
and grabbed hold of the Komnian.
He snatched the lot away
and with a swift motion,
hurled it into the sea.
“That was my lot you had drawn!” spoke Hialtr
“Then why did you not let those before us see it?”
Leo the commander did say this to Hialtr who replied,
“Look at the one that is remaining,
you will recognize its mark.”
When the lot was examined,
it was seen that it was indeed Leo’s mark
And so, the Northmen were granted the favorable land to encamp on.
During the campaigning, Hialtr remained in reserve,
His men did not battle often with the foes.
Yet when they were bidden to fight, they routed all.
In this way, the Northmen were seen with more respect,
And Hialtr became well respected among the Komnians.
It was now made apparent what the Northmen could do,
Especially against the soft-bodied men of the seas there.
Hialtr gained victory and plunder, wherever he did fight.
When the Komnians returned to their city,
The Northmen remained and continued to plunder
For weather in the south was fine
and the god Veidr's winds blew pleasant,
in that land of milk and grove.
Hialtr now marched his new army south
To land the Komnians call Mykra.
There, he did capture eighty or so towns
Some surrendered to him,
Others resisted and were tormented.
Bravely did he risk his life,
In the lands of the hot south.
Then did the young warrior,
Wage a grim game of war,
upon those enemies called the Zhors.
Hialtr did force submission,
On these lands the Komnians called theirs
Gifting these great victories,
To the fair Emperor Matthias
Who bore them proudly.
Hialtr became very wealthy there,
In the Southern land, against the Zhors
Men of the horse, routed easily
Fleeing upon steeds,
Hialtr seized their won loot
and his hoard grew full.
A city refused to surrender to the army
This city would not fall to assault.
So Hialtr ordered his men to a nearby stream.
To dig a tunnel where the stream flowed
And into a deep ravine nearby.
This displaced the water,
and the river ran away from the town,
Soon the city how no water to drink,
thousands sweltered in dense heat,
and surrendered to Hialtr's army.
After this, Hialtr resolved to return to Komnekstad
With his plunder now returned to him,
he would be on his way,
To return home and reclaim his birthright.
But the Emperor had scorned Hialtr,
Spurred on by the dark whispers
of Leo, his kinsman.
The way back was shut and locked
He refused to return Hialtr’s treasure.
Yet Hialtr did not rush to violent deed,
But asked of him one thing,
“What must I give, for the return of my sword-won hoard?"
And the Emperor answered
“Give me the full of my crown in Mykra,
These lands must be restored to me.”
And so, dutifully, Hialtr went off
and marched to do what was bid of him.
To a place named for one Gordian,
every town had heard of the Northmen
and surrendered as they passed by.
With courage sharp as a sword’s edge,
The unbeaten conqueror did go South
Far to the town of this Gordian
and beckoned them to surrender to him.
With overwhelming advantage,
The town fell before the month,
yet remained unscorched and undisputed.
None suffered or starved there,
for fate watched over Hialtr ever more.
On returning to the city of the Komnians,
The Emperor was overjoyed with the news,
of Hialtr’s many victories.
In the midst of night, he ordered the hoards returned
And a week of celebration for the Northman.
Splendor unlike any seen
by any man of the frozen North,
was given to the conqueror.
Atop a gilded chariot adorned with plumed feathers,
Hialtr was escorted down the large street of the city.
So acclaimed was he,
That upon the altar of the largest temple,
A laurel crown of grass and moss was placed on his head
And he was named a son
of the Emperor and most righteous.
Yet so, Hialtr would not remain there,
even as the Emperor offered to him,
The hand of his beautiful daughter,
Who shone like the sun itself.
Hialtr refused, for he wished to return home.
With a deep sadness,
the Emperor bid him farewell
And upon a great host of ships,
Hialtr sailed again,
The rivers flow to the East Sea.
During his time away,
the sons of Hjodi made many ill moves.
They built many fine ships
though they had no cause to do so.
Many were gutted unjustly
and hung in the square in Holvik
before their corpses fell from rotten rope.
Their wicked deeds made each
more eager to see them ruined.
Word reached the North of the coming ships,
drenched in blood and gold of the south.
Of the good Knutsson,
the last of Roreth's blood.
The winds spoke of the coming clash.
In their fear, the brothers consulted
a great seeress and wise woman.
Svivra was her name,
and scrying into the fire,
she saw a great tempest arriving.
When the dragon ships landed
Svivra’s vision became clear
She spoke, quivering in the dark
“Now will come a great storm,
to discern the predator from prey.”
Hialtr called a meeting at Sovn
with the angered Men of Holvik.
“Next, we will raise a levy,
a host of splendid men-at-arms
To rid the rot from fair Holvik’s shores.”
Thus, the host of Hialtr waited
as winter's winds blew before them.
By spring, the Hird of Holvik arrived,
and many noble men swore to Hialtr,
to aid him in the coming clash.
And so, Hialtr boarded his ship.
Sjoravn ploughed and pushed.
Her oak oars in tune
with the whipping of the wind,
burst forth a great seaspray.
Behind her, the gale burst forth
Hurricane had come
a rocking tempest.
Dark skies came to the land,
ill omens would be seen in Holvik.
The vile sons of Hjodi,
suffering and lame,
shall meet the great king
and master of the Northmen,
Prowling the sea atop his dragon ship.
Only the gods can decree now,
the side that will rob the other,
of life and all their lands.
For the gods care little
for treacherous men.
Often, did Hialtr launch his vessels to sea
with victory in mind and glory.
Now he sails on in anger.
Across the sea to the land of his birth,
Taken from him so many years ago.
A host of great warships
Now strain against the sea
to the land of Holvik.
To victory or death,
such is the Northman's way.
In haste, the men of Thraneland
Fled at sight of Hialtr and his ships,
Hialtr now lusted for battle.
Eager to see the bodies of murderers
Thrown to the sea and eaten.
At the time, all of Hjeksur
Lay burning and molten.
Fire burned on, fueled by Hialtr’s fury.
For no limit was made,
On punishing those who did not surrender.
The brothers feel the havoc now
of war made on them.
By one who was forged in the fires
of war so cruel,
so far from home.
Often was it asked,
why the fair Hialtr
vented on his rage so
towards these towns
but none say anything of it
For those vile may be born lucky,
but luck's fortune abandoned them,
For they challenge the true king.
Who bloodies his shield ashore
and wins his land with his army dry.
Many came before Hialtr,
outnumbered as they were to parlay.
Brave as they were, they were not mad,
they refused to fight the army in battle,
for those who would not do the same for them.
Those to be subjects of the good king
Should first show their submission openly.
For by sitting or kneeling before him,
Those who endure unjust rule,
learn the rightness of rule made just.
For as the king wishes,
all the people must bow low.
The king will demand obedience
from those whose obedience
may be swayed so.
The flailing swords of the sons of Hjodi
may still drive the king from his shores.
Unless first persuaded,
to fall beneath his axe
or be hewed beneath his sword.
This is absolutely epic the way you paint the fury of the seas, the honor of kings, and the relentless drive of Hialtr makes me feel as though I’m aboard the dragon ships myself. Your vivid imagery and the rhythm of your storytelling give the battles and intrigues a pulse that’s thrilling and immersive. I’m completely drawn into the weight of legacy, vengeance, and the stakes of every clash. I can’t wait to see how will Hialtr finally confront the sons of Hjodi, and will the gods themselves intervene in the reckoning to come?
To be completely honest, I have not written too much about this, and my attention, as far as writing is concerned, has been drawn toward a much bigger project. However, I do have a few chapters in this left that I'll publish just to say I did. I appreciate how much you liked it :)
That makes total sense. I really enjoyed what you shared, and I’ll look forward to the remaining chapters when they’re up. Best of luck with your bigger project! Also, is there anywhere else readers can connect with you and chat more about your writing?
I'd be open to having some outlet for anyone interested in chatting about my writing. However, it hasn't been something I've devoted any time to, nor do I really have any experience in coming up with something.
Until we get connected over email.
That seems like a good idea.
I'm glad to hear that, here is my email [email protected]